Reactions to Poetry; p6

Voyage

By Carmen Tafolloa

I was the fourth ship.
          Behind Niña, Pinta, Santa María,
          Lost at sea while watching a seagull,
          Following the wind and sunset skies,
          While the others set their charts.
I was the fourth ship.
          Breathing in salt and flying with clouds,
          Sailing moonbreezes and starvision nights,
          Rolling into the wave and savoring its lull,
          While the others pointed their prows.
I was the fourth ship.
          Playfully in love with the sea,
          Eternally entwined with the sky,
          Forever vowed to my voyage,
          While the others shouted “Land.”

This poem is obviously about how the author feels about sailing from land to land, taking a voyage. It describes everything they love about the ocean, about how it affects the ship. I’d almost say it’s a love letter to the sea, the ending even saying that many aboard the ship are excited for land, hoping for it, while this author would rather continue sailing forever.

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